David Tanguay

Show Us The Way (Poem)



Posted: Sunday, September 20, 2009

by David Tanguay

Show us the way dear God,- show us the way
As we live in this world we are often led astray
 
Temptations come in many various forms
We are often gobbled up in life's grisly storms
 
As we work to earn our daily bread to survive
We wonder is there another way to stay alive
 
Working often makes me wonder why
The fruits of my labor - the food I can buy 
 
Life isn't always fair we can be dealt some serious blows
But we mustn't give in we must stay on our toes
 
The road to happiness isn't paved with goal
The journey is rough but we feel the comfort in our soul
 
Worldly are we whom seek simple pleasures
For in our heart - lies all of our treasures
 
Love is the beginning and love is the end
If we walk with love - we find a true friend
 
So yes dear Lord show us the way
As we settle in for the night we will offer a prayer
 
 
 
             Show Us The Way 
 
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» left by Teresa Ortiz
2 years 248 days ago.
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beautiful David. Very beautiful.
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 248 days ago.
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Thank you Teresa, I'm glad you liked it.
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» left by Ken McCreless
2 years 247 days ago.
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Wonderful sentiment, David.
 
Nicely done.
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 247 days ago.
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Thank you Ken
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» left by Edward Rhymes
2 years 247 days ago.
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Blessed words indeed David. I appreciate especially: "Love is the beginning and love is the end" and my heart says yes and Amen.
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 247 days ago.
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"and my heart says yes and Amen." I like that Edward, thanks
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» left by Mogama
2 years 247 days ago.
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I share Edward's sentiment about the great line from David's poem: "Love is the beginning and love is the end. If we walk with love - we find a true friend." Thanks, David, for the devotional attitude that resulted in this moving poetic prayer. ~mogama~
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 247 days ago.
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Thank you for commenting Mogama
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» left by Marijo Phelps
from mountain meadow CO
2 years 241 days ago.
So glad I found this piece - He is the answer, for sure! Marijo (pronounced Mary Jo)
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 241 days ago.
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Well I'm glad you liked it Marijo, thank you for commenting.
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