David Tanguay

The Birth of a Nation (Poem)



Posted: Wednesday, August 26, 2009

by David Tanguay

George Washington was the first to take command
The first lead
er of this new and exciting land
 
From the hand of Thomas Jefferson came the declaration
Of independence.
This work of art became our means of transcendence
 
From the work of so many who sought freedom for all
To the battlefields came the sounds of the cannon ball
 
Many died in the beginning for a new life of freedom
Our constitution was written with words of wisdom
 
Do as you please as long as you respect the rights of
Your neighbor
You may seek an education or choose a life of labor
 
As a citizen of this land, we have the right to speak our mind
For we believe in equality and the beliefs of all of mankind
 
As a nation we faced many hard times together
In pleasant - as well as stormy weather

We give thanks to God for our union as a nation
For we rely on him to grant us our salvation
 
The birth of a nation over two hundred years ago
Is still young and active as she continues to grow
 

 
 
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» left by Connor Davidson
2 years 273 days ago.
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Great poem. Well done.
 
A very fun read with a very powerful message. I like.
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 273 days ago.
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Thank you for commenting Connor
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» left by sue thom
from nj
2 years 272 days ago.
hi David,
 
i liked your poem, and the sense of Patriotism.
 
i believe we are moving forward, and i hope my beliefs are correct.
 
thank you for sharing this,
 
my best to you,
 
sue
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 272 days ago.
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Thank you for commenting Susan, yes I believe we are moving forward too.
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» left by Ken McCreless
2 years 272 days ago.
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A poignant reminder of our national heritage.
 
Nicely done, David.
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 271 days ago.
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Thank you for commenting Ken, I'm glad you liked it.
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» left by Linda DeWitt
2 years 270 days ago.
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Thank you for a great poem. Very patriotic.
 
Linda D
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» left by David Tanguay 2 years 270 days ago.
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Thank you for commenting Linda
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